We just wrapped up our Twits projects and I'm very proud of all of you. Your performance in the videos shows that you cared about your work and you put a good amount of time and effort into them. What is more important however, is how YOU feel you did on the project. Was it your best effort? What would you do differently?
After watching your projects I have some thoughts I'd like to share.
1) When you talk you need to be louder and more clear.
2) It helps to have the entire script written out and planned before you start to film.
3) Being silly doesn't work as well as you think it will. Take your time and produce more thoughtful work.
4) Ask yourself this question before you begin the project: What is it I’m trying to show my audience? What am I trying to teach them?
5) Practice, practice, practice... the more comfortable you are with the script, the better it will sound.
Your assignment this week is to tell me what you would do differently if we filmed them again. How would you make it better and more informational.
PROGRESS NOT PERFECTION,
Mr. Dickson
If I had to do it over again I would do more skits and make it longer. For my performace i would talk louder. I would not not change anything else.
ReplyDeleteIf we would refilm the movies I would give my partner more credit in the film an also plan in it more better so the film went smoothly.
ReplyDeleteI would do differently is make more seanse in the movie to tell more about the Twits so the audience will know more about the Twits.I will make it better by telling you more about the Twits.
ReplyDeleteWhat I would have done differently was do some more details in my movie. I would make it better and more infomational by telling a little bit more detailed facts about the book.
ReplyDeleteI would say that my best effort was finishing the whole entire thing. I do agree that we should speak louder and clear and don't murmur. What I would do differently next time is that I would make just one clip in stead of 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 clips.
ReplyDeleteI felt proud of my Twits project because Amanda and I did a lot of work editing and filming the project and all that hard work payed off I think everyone liked it.What I would do differently next time is speak louder and clearer so everyone could hear me better.I would add some of the evil pranks Mr. and Mrs.Twit did to each other like how Mrs.Twit put worms on his plate instead of spaghetti.
ReplyDeletewe should have been better at our video and make it more imformathional.
ReplyDeletethe way i think that i would change my film is by not doing every little word in slow motion and i think that we should re-take a film if we get it wrong. i also think that i would not want to do a movie trailer but a rap battle because i saw a rap battle during spagetti day witch was today, and i thought that the rap battle was very good and i think that if my partner and i could change the subject and not do a movie trailer but a battle and some thing else i would like to change is what we filmed i just think that we should not have said the words that we said and we should have done bloopers but we don't have any but sometimes i think that i should mess up on purpose to be funny int he bloopers but not to funny or it's just gonna look bad. if i were a judge i would give my film witch was not finished yet because we forgot music, a 6% i liked my film but not alot. that is what i would like to change to my twits project.
ReplyDeleteI would change my actions and how I said my lines. I said my lines weird and silly. If I would change anything about my actions I would stop hitting the table with my fist and replace it with you had to do this! I'm so mad at you! In my lines I would change saying youuuuuuuuuuuu! All the time.
ReplyDeleteWould talk a little clearer and I would make longer by about one minute. I would also change the lines up a bit. I would try to mention more about the Twits habits.
ReplyDeleteI would pratice more on my lines because at the end i did not think anyone notice cause the movie was slow motion i mess up! I really like everyones and I wanted to change by putting a little of everyones film.
ReplyDeleteI would pratice more on my lines because at the end i did not think anyone notice cause the movie was slow motion i mess up! I really like everyones films and I wanted to change by putting a little of everyones film. please put this one MR.D cause I found a few mess up and fix them
ReplyDeleteI would video all on the same day because we had to re-film a whole since and it did not look as well as it probly would have if we did it with the same clothes and props. I wouldhave also liked to have another since like wwe had a speggetti since and a pie sicne and if we would have done one or two more sinces it would have completed and held the show together. I would have also liked to film inside room 402 instead of outside because it would have looked neater and more like an actual movie. And we also could have put a color curtin ro background instead of outside. But if anything, the show went very well Wednesday when we hade lunch together.
ReplyDeleteI would make my self more loud. I might make a new script and get somebody else to film. And i might take out some of the bloopers
ReplyDeleteIf I had to do the whole thing over again I will make the scripts better and make them longer.And make the play much better than the other plays that I did in my life.And I wish I can do it all over again to make it much better.
ReplyDeleteIf I did it all over again, I would do a News channel. I would also speak more louder.I would also send the scripts to Mr.Dickson the right way.
ReplyDeleteIf I had to do it again I would, not focus on bloopers , yell so I can be heard ,and have fun. Sent by I pad
ReplyDeletei would act more perpectly because i didn't directly hit mr.witty. and i will speak louder.
ReplyDeletealso make the script funny.
I think me and my and my partner should make some fun and act fun and do it perfectly so that everyone can vote for me and my partner.
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